Topic: The Suitability of Adjudication system in UAE Construction Industry from the perspective of Islamic & Civil law of UAE
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As before, my biggest concern with your dissertation is twofold. First, your expression, especially the choice of words, often makes your dissertation very hard or impossible to understand. Second, sometimes, even if we allow a room for doubt regarding the issue of expression, some text still makes little sense, in the context of your work.